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[maninderwalia]

Hi!
Please submit your views on the following page:
http://www.yrweddingplanner.com/wedding_planner.html


Regards,
Maninder

[french dread]

Nice and soft. I dont like the effect of the picture though, I dont know if u tried a screen effect, but for me it looks like u have scanned a magazine causing "moiré". A screen effect isn't appropriate to the theme of the page imho too, this kind of effect is more for techie stuff.
Apart from that it is nice :)

[maninderwalia]

Hi! French
Thanks for the comments.
Please have a look again, I have changed the image and added a B/w image.


Regards,
Maninder

[french dread]

Mmmh the first picture looked nicer except the screen effect. The new one dont reflect the joy and happiness of the first pic, too much rigid and classical i think. Also The black and white dont feet in the page imho. Cant u use the first one without the effect?
Or perhaps work on this new picture in bichromy to have blue and white, or pink and white instead of B&W.

[sytemaker]

Unless you intend to turn them into links I would avoid underlined phrases.

[scottiecl]

Originally posted by sytemaker
Unless you intend to turn them into links I would avoid underlined phrases. Definitely.

You might also want to break up some of those text paragraphs by bolding some keywords that give the reader an idea of that the paragraph is about, the same way you have done with "Wedding Planner". People tend to skim so catch their attention with the important phrases.

Assuming your target is the bride, the pink is good. I didn't get to see the other image but this one is a little stiff. There are some really wonderful wedding photos out there, even in stock photography, that convey more drama.

Very nice so far!