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doniv
12-04-2003, 02:53/02:53AM
i would value your opinions on these descp and any suggestion to make them better.

1."Printing Press for book printing, office stationery printing, brochures printing, calendars, postage stamps, invitation cards; for over 50 years. Free printing estimates available"

2."Commercial printing press based in Bahrain offers free quotes on book printing, office stationery, and check printing services."

3. "Commercial printing for books, magazines, packages, as well as a security press division. Offices in UK and Middle East. Description of products and services, machinery and equipment, estimates, and client list."

4. "Based in Bahrain; offers quotes on printing books, commercial jobs, office stationery, and checks. Description of products and services, machinery and equipment, and contact information. "

Kindly consider if they are spammy , effective in communicating wht the site is all about, good enough to get a click.
thnx in advance


[Moved from Google forum to Description tag forum. Please read this (http://www.ihelpyouservices.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=7575) for further clarification. - Jill]
ihelpyou
12-04-2003, 06:03/06:03AM
They all look fine. Google does not show the description tag anyway in the results.
scottiecl
12-04-2003, 07:21/07:21AM
Hi Doniv-

Like Doug said, there is no problem with any of those descriptions. A better question is, what keyphrase (s) are you targeting on the home page? The description tag should be written with those in mind.
doniv
13-04-2003, 00:52/12:52AM
actually descp 1 and 2 contain all my keywords with 2 being an abridged version.

but i fell that the word printing would be considered over used even though it is used in a correct combination with other words.

i want the second description but i feel it will not go well with the editors at diff directories.

all the words are used on the home but i feel it has been diluted
g1smd
13-04-2003, 19:38/07:38PM
Bear in mind that for the ODP, any words in the category path or the site title will not be repeated in the site description in most (read: "virtually all") circumstances.